Hey there! Welcome to Community Critique, a weekly event where a new show is presented for constructive criticism in order to all learn from each other and make better content in the future!
As a gesture of good faith, I'm offering up my own show, Brains, as the first sacrifice. Please refer to the rules before posting your critiques on this thread and all other threads in this category.
Now, onto Brains!
Brains has 2 seasons online now, as well as 2 extended universe projects (you can ignore the latter for today's purposes, though). It's about Alison Sumner, a college neuropsychology student who survived the zombie apocalypse on her campus and is now ready to get back into the dating scene. Life, murder, and the final throws of the zombie plague get in the way, though.
My name, for those of you who might not know me, is Bri Castellini, and I'm the creator, writer, executive producer, lead actress (Alison Sumner), sound technician, lead editor, assistant director, and one of the set and wardrobe designers from Brains, among many other things.
I won't say much to set up this critique, but I will say that there is a significant jump in production quality between seasons 1 and 2, so please consider that if you have particular production quality comments. Other than that, have at it. What did you like/dislike? What did we do well and what could we have done better? Any particular advice about the show and future shows I will hopefully create?