I think my comments are going to be similar to the other ones that have been left already- the camera and production quality are top notch, but the content itself has some serious pacing and delivery issues. This series could have five minute episodes and make much more of an impact than its current 14 minute form.
Another thing I’ll touch on is something Meg noticed, about it taking a while to get to the story. The episode you shared doesn’t really get to the point until about five minutes in, which, for a 14 minute episode, is way too long. Particularly on the web, you need to make clear with the central conflict is as soon as possible, otherwise you’re going to lose your audience before you even get a chance to tell your story.
There’s clearly a lot of talent in front of and behind the camera on this series, but all the elements haven’t quite lined up. I think you should start by looking at it on a script level and then hone from there- once your script is snappier, your delivery will inherently get snappier, which will lead to a more cohesive, very funny result.