These are pretty good!
For 1, I would have tripod-mounted the camera. With the edge of the map being so close to the edge of the frame, the camera movement is distracting. Alternatively, applying a stabilize process in post would have done the trick too.
For 3, that’s a nice focus roll, and I imagine the purpose is to draw attention to the girl while the foreground actor is speaking - but their heads aren’t quite close enough together. The viewer can easily see he’s going out of focus, but it’s not obvious that she’s coming into focus. I would either have changed the angle a bit to put their heads closer together, or incorporated a push along with the focus roll to highlight the girl more strongly (especially if the push took the foreground actor out of frame).