This was made for the Stareable Pilot Contest. It didn’t win, but there was a note that I could offer it up for critique, so that’s what I’m doing. It’s about a girl who finds a buried hand in a park that literally pulls her down the rabbit hole.
A bit about me: My name is Joe Heath and I’ve been making videos since I was about 15. You can check them out over at Minty Pineapple Entertainments. I also made the defunct unfinished web series Monsters Anonymous (Stareable link!) and the soon-to-be finished The Projectionist Project (Stareable link!), the latter of which frequently guest stars Chris Cherry of Brains and Relativity fame.
I don’t have any specific concerns about the script, but I am open to any and all notes. I’m also open to any and all notes on that other stuff I make, but that’s entirely up to you.
THE CHOICE IS YOURS AND YOURS ALONE. OLMEC, OPEN THE TEMPLE GATE.