The Darkest Timeline : episode 4
History is with me. What say you?
Do you remember BerenstAin Bears or BerentstEin Bears?
The multiverse is real! Any one who remembers BerenstAin is from this reality, but any one who remembers BerenstEin is from an alternate reality.
I am Thomas Tulak, executive producer, writer, director, and editor for The Darkest Timeline, and I’m asking for a review of this episode.
This is the rough cut of a proof of concept. This is episode 4. We are planning to use this episode to sell the show and get funding to complete season 1. So I would like some feed back on the edit of this cut. How well does it flow? does it feel laggy? does the edit work? is it interesting? does it keep you engaged?
As I said, this is a rough cut, it has temp music, place holder VFX, and the audio is only a rough mix. (We are well aware of the problem with the mic pops and are working toward fixing it for the future). The final draft will have better special effects, and an original score.
Also, as we will be reshooting this episode with some different actors (not the entire cast), along with the rest of the 1st season, I’d like to ask what works and what doesn’t work about it. We will have the chance to completely re do all of this. Hopefully you can see where I tried to go with it. Does it get there?